Ngu (Half Breed)

Amaya
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Daughter of the Stars

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Ngu (Half Breed) Apr 4, 2009 13:55:56 GMT -6

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Post by Amaya on Apr 4, 2009 13:55:56 GMT -6

There are a few things you are lacking in.

Appearance must be 200 words or more. Personality must be 200 words or more. If she doesn't have any weapons, state that she doesn't have any weapons. The history must be 200 words or more. and the RP sample must be 200 words or more.

In a hundred years, does it matter of there are Nites there to protect you? Sure does.

Amaya Administrator Daughter of the Stars Posts: 75	Ngu (Half Breed) Apr 4, 2009 15:34:56 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Amaya on Apr 4, 2009 15:34:56 GMT -6 And your spelling needs to be checked. And if she has a weapon, why is it not stated? Please run the original post through spell check. That's what it's there for.
	In a hundred years, does it matter of there are Nites there to protect you? Sure does.

midnight Co-Admin Posts: 8	Ngu (Half Breed) Apr 4, 2009 16:04:50 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by midnight on Apr 4, 2009 16:04:50 GMT -6 could you do some thing for me Ngu? could you make your strengthes and weaknesses with 3 or 4 sentences per each.

Uzeal Forum Mod Posts: 149	Ngu (Half Breed) Apr 17, 2009 23:17:24 GMT -6 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Uzeal on Apr 17, 2009 23:17:24 GMT -6 Here comes the profanityyyyyyyyyyyyyyy~

Post by Amaya on Apr 4, 2009 13:55:56 GMT -6

Post by Amaya on Apr 4, 2009 15:34:56 GMT -6

Post by midnight on Apr 4, 2009 16:04:50 GMT -6

Post by Uzeal on Apr 17, 2009 23:17:24 GMT -6